Crazy RF Idea

[Princess-of-Dragons]

I kinda wish I could keep both Cotton and Half. I have a feeling I'd like them both very much. It'd be so hard to choose. ;A;

[Guest]

Aaw thank you ^^.

I've haven't been able to put it into events but I know how they will act once they fall for the MC.
056 becomes super over-protective. He gets like that because Dolly is the only "normal" thing he's ever had in his life. So he really does not want to lose that. But that is not until much later on. For the most part he is a jerk and then there is a small awkward stage and then he becomes a better person.
Cotton has a very regular relationship compared to most of the other guys. He is very shy with romance but becomes much more confident in himself. He also has some identity crisises.
Half is very flirty once he likes Dolly. But for his whole event path he makes it clear he does not want to be in a relationship. Because he doesn't considers himself as a real person. Only Cotton is a real person. So it won't be until after Cotton is gone that he is willing to think about having an actual relationship.

Titus isn't my character so you'll have to wait for CherryRose (Sorbet) to answer that for you .

:D Thanks! I gotta say, 056 has to be my favourite...yesIamtotallynormal But all of the characters are just so interesting and well rounded...do you write? o3o Because if you do I would looove a link to some of your work.

Maybe I'll work on some character sketches later for something to do~

[Googaboga]

I'm glad you feel that way Princess ^^. I know it's bad that I'm happy you feel sad about having to lose one, but I was afraid Cotton would be overshadowed by Half. I mean Cotton is much more normal and docile compared to Half. So I didn't want everyone to pick Half over Cotton. Cotton is such a sweet guy I don't want either of them to « Apple Pie »'X.

I like 056 too. He's kind of a creep but he grew on me .

Thank you. It makes me so happy to know you like my characters. I do come up with a lot of ideas for stories but I never write them down ^^;. I am going to make another idea topic for a new RF game in a week or two. So you can read that when it's done if you like. HM and RF ideas are the only ideas I ever bother to write down XD.

Many of my characters are inspired by characters from those story ideas though. Like Cotton and Half were inspired by a character I made before who also had a duel personality.

I'd love to see your character sketches sometime :D.

[Princess-of-Dragons]

;A;
Happy at my sadness?
Lol
I don't want any of them to go either. (and I want to marry them) But I can't choose. They balance each other well and it'd be interesting to be married to a guy with 2 personalities instead of one leaving. Think of all the fun that would be~
And I'm sure someone would prefer Cotton's non-craziness over Half. :'D

[CherryRose]

Sooo...a lot to catch up on, huh? xD; I can't believe I haven't come on on in so long. I've missed you all~ I think I'll combine all the stuff I wanted to respond to in a few big spoilers. Hopefully you guys won't be too confused/intimidated. But to start with:

@Everyone
I finally pieced together Titus's long bio. :D I really had this all typed up for a while now, I've just been too lazy to organize my thoughts. :3 Anyway, it is a LOT longer than that of my previous character, Ciel, (which was already long enough) so I'd be happy if anyone reads just a paragraph or two of it. A lot of it's not too important anyway. ^^; Here it is:

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Titus is a writer. He's also in charge of communications and negotiations with the rebel group sending supplies to the settlement. Titus is very persuasive and charismatic. He can usually talk people into doing his will with ease. Due to his education, he has an impressive amount of knowledge about war and machines. As such, he is skilled at drawing up blueprints and can construct weapons if he can obtain the right materials, though Titus prefers to order others around to do his dirty work. He also has a knack for forging documents. Titus likes to insist upon being called "Lord Titus," but no one in the settlement seems to listen, so he doesn't make a big deal of it. As he bonds with Melah, he doesn't bother correcting her when she just calls him "Titus." Titus has ties in the Sechs Empire. He had plans of branching out here, but to his disappointment everyone was too crazy to be suitable members to his cause. Titus keeps a notebook in which he jots down his many ideas and observations. He can be very touchy about others getting near it.

Titus is a truly wicked character with malicious intent. His evil plans include overtaking the world, becoming Supreme Ruler, and exacting revenge on his enemies. Titus envisions a world where he is the ruler of all and everyone is his faithful servants, opressed yet compliant in serving their lord. In return, he would keep their conditions liveable and run the lands efficently. Titus thinks his plans through very thoroughly, paying a lot of attention to detail. He's not bloodthirsty and when it comes to his plots, he would rather spare as much of the populace as possible, if only for them to do his dirty work. The only exception to this mindset of having mercy on his underlings is the Sechs Empire, which he plans to wipe out completely. Titus has long been out-of-his-mind obsessed, but he has come to terms with this and controls his emotions effectively. Titus is never straight about his plans with Melah, and normally no one can tell what he's thinking.

Intelligent and calm, he only shows intense emotion when he really gets into one of his ideas. When he gets like this, it's common for him to start to mumble his inner thoughts and twisted notions, unable to supress them. At this point, Titus doesn't even realize he's talking out loud. His plans start out sounding simple enough, but then he gets really worked up and becomes more enthusiastic as he begins to elaborate on his plans, to the point he sounds like a madman. Of course, once he's snapped out of it, he addresses you as if he never lost his cool, and would think of Melah as a fool if she claims otherwise. Titus doesn't feel enthusiasm toward much else. He keeps a pleasant manner toward you so that you're more likely to follow through on his orders, but that never takes the authoritive tone out of his voice. Titus is very confident in his abilities. He has a notable habit of smirking and flipping his hair.

As stated, Titus works as a writer. This suits him well, as he is such an idea guy. His books are mostly fantasy stories that feature the villain winning in the end, though he does fancy a scary story now and again. He read excessively to obtain as much knowledge as possible. Titus spends most of his time in his house, though he does go out at least once a day, being that he's health-aware and knows fresh air is important for the body. Whenever he has writer's block and tires of reading, he enjoys taking a dip in the hot springs. Titus has a soft spot for baked goods and magic crystals. He especially loves magic crystals because he's entraced by the power that radiates from them.

Titus lost a good bit of his humanity, so he doesn't long for companionship, though he can sometimes get fun out of human reactions. He's not interested in becoming close to anyone, as he sees that as weakness and only cares about his own survival. For the most part, Titus doesn't really like or trust people, but he knows that using them will be to his advantage. He doesn't waste time with people he considers incompetent, but he likes to keep on good enough terms with everyone in case they can come in handy later on. He starts out eager for Melah's cooperation, but Titus can turn cold and harsh toward her if she continually denies to help him, treats him with disrespect, or doesn't take her job seriously.

Not sure what I'll release next, Titus's backstory or Snap and Willow's short bios. Probably the latter, as nothing is known about them at this point. But it depends on what I feel like working on.
@Googsie

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That Reed event was perfect! :D You seriously had me going there, thinking it was 056's event. That was an awesome turn-around. I can't believe Reed actually stabbed someone, with the intent of killing them. :O Well, I mean, I guess I can given the circumstances, but it still shocked me. All the character interactions were amazingly well-done, and you had me laughing at parts, as usual. ;D That part at the end with Reed giving her the toy and getting embarassed was so beautiful. I really like Reed much better now. I'm sorry you lost some good dialogue. D: But I think you did a really great job anyway. Even though you made me think it was 056's event at first, that was part of the brilliance. And I think, for the majority, it did focus plenty on Reed, so don't worry. ^^

Yeah, especially when you type as much as I do. x3 It's okay though. I've gotten over it now.

If you want you can do that. I don't care either way.

Yay.

Aww, thanks Googsie. I feel more confident now~ Very true. That sounds about right. Even though Titus doesn't care about people, I think he might appreciate being respected like that.

Yeah, that could work. I could see her not really caring about others knowing her name, but changing it up a bit on impulse as a joke.

Seriously? O_O Why weren't they there?

That makes sense. Plus I think she has such a fresh and excitable attitude, that people can't help but be cheered up by her, even if she does some pretty troublesome things. At least, that's how I'd feel.

Well there are some upsides to that too. Like, whenever people want to draw your characters. Since you don't have a definite vision for them, the artist has freedom to do whatever they feel like with them. But with mine, you'd have some limits to go by, color-wise at least. Though who knows, maybe some artists do better with some idea to start with than none at all. I have no idea. ^^;

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Haha, poor Cards. He really has a one-track mind when it comes to Melah. At least when he was training Sparrow, he had something else to focus on.

I know the feeling. <3 Uh, sorry, something like what? xD; I can't wait to see what you come up with on rivals. I'm looking forward to a little romance with the characters outside the MC. x3 Does this mean...rival children? *shifty eyes* I think you're still doing plenty, Googsie. We all have a lot to talk about with the idea, you've come up with so much already, and you've come up with really awesome events. So don't feel like you're not doing enough.

Sounds good. ^^

Yeah, I think I'm getting better as well. But old habits are hard to break. Luckily I've always been able to catch up, for the most part. Really? Out of curiousity, what are they for? I'm sure she'd love having perfect memory, since she used to be pretty forgetful even before her memory was altered. x3 I think Ciel is strong-willed enough to where she'd want to get her memory back, no matter what it meant. Though befriending Melah and finding reasons to stay in the settlement would give her more courage. And that's right, we'd need a way to have her backstory found out in game. Okay then, even if the airship thing doesn't work, she'll get her memory back regardless. He did? :O I had no clue. Poor Wren, that just adds to the list of emotions he's had to lock away. </3

That makes the whole thing even more tragic. D: I might've been able to get over it if Sparrow was only in love with her ideal of Cards, but to hear that she knows him for what he's really like, it's really upsetting that they don't get together. But it makes sense that Cards wouldn't be able to get over Melah that easily. Do the two at least become friends again? Even if Sparrow can't have him as her man, she might be able to make him a little better, since she has such a good understanding of him?

I guess not everyone can change, at least not completely. But I do hope he gets better, somehow. You think so? Yay~ Yeah, I don't think Melah would be too keen on introducing him to 056 or Twinkle. xD Hmm, not sure how she'd get over that then. I'm guessing it would take a pretty strong influence for her to get over herself, especially if those trying to influence her don't possess her level of beauty.

That could be really cute. I would enjoy having Jem be involved like that, even if she doesn't play a major part in their friendship. I like the sound of that, since it would make more sense for them to start bonding a bit earlier on.

Don't you start making me like a couple that could never happen, Googsie. D:< But I agree, that does sound adorable for a love story. Glad I was able to help out. :D

Actually, I wouldn't be surprised if that was true for some shows. x3 Or at least part of the reason. You're right though, I never want these ideas of ours to end, so I suppose it'd be a similar feeling to those creating the show. But sometimes it feels like they just don't much as much effort in the show as time goes on. D: Of course, I could easily be wrong. Maybe things never feel the same as the first season since that first season was when the most creativity was being poured into it, being a new idea and all.

That's what I'll have to do then. Once I can figure out where to do that. There are many songs that I can only find on Youtube, and I haven't really attempted to look for them elsewhere yet. But I guess I should get around to that sometime.

Me neither. I hope that other people fall in love with these crazies just as we've done. <3 But hey, Imagine/Cards have surpassed all, with Cotten/Half climbing their way to victory as well. :D

Just give it some time. I'm sure inspiration will come. And if not, I have this last event to look forward to. >:D

Aw, even the good ending was sad? D: Did it really have to be that way? Nothing could be done? I'm not sure I'd like that game then, I need my happy endings. x( Or at least something happy in the end.

Um, uh, well how about you draw Melah's house in the settlement? I'd love get a glimpse of where she lives, even if it's all desolate and beaten down. Seeing it would give me a better feel for what this crazy RF universe is like, even though I can still picture it sufficently in my head. But if scenery/architecture would be too much for you, then I understand. ^^ I know I couldn't draw anything like that, so I don't want to ask too much. x3;

Hehe, thank you~ :'D I don't care how long it takes, I shall patiently await the day I may be honored with a game dedicated to me. And in the meantime, I'm happy to work with you on other ideas. ^^

That makes sense. I would probably focus more on the characters too. A pirate RF sounds like a lot of fun, and I'm sure you came up with some lovely characters that I'd enjoy getting to know. Yeah, no (befriendable) pirates in an ocean-themed RF is pretty lame. But hey, at least you can give the characters pirate hats. I know I'm gonna do that with James and pretend he's a pirate merchant. >:3

Aw, I like Mayor's first event. It makes sense for the first event to be shorter like that. I just loved his little analogy about light and darkness. It was clever and got his point across really well. You did a great job, especially since I know it's harder to find inspiration for the early events and keep them from getting boring. ^^

You're not feeling well again? D': Try not to push yourself Googsie. Did you get to catch up on sleep at all?

@Gentle-hime

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:D I totally thought Jem would look like Odette too! I think a similar design would really suit her. <3 That's so cool that you're thinking of drawing Rife, Reed, and Jem, despite the fact you've already done those other three. I'll bet Googsie'll be super happy that you're drawing one of her favorites. ^^ I wish you luck on your drawings, whenever you get a chance to work on them~

Haha, this is your retribution for making Eric unmarriageable. >:D /no
But yeah, I'll bet your feelings are very similar to mine when it comes to these unobtainable guys. EricxAlice was so meant to be. ;_;

I'm not that nice, am I? xD; Who knows, maybe I have an evil streak.

You're absolutely right. I should be ashamed for not believing in his abundance of manliness. x3 True, but Ghost is the manliest of them all. <3

@Starlight

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Yeah, but I guess little setbacks like this are a part of life. So I'm good now. ^^

Ah, Drake and Josh! I used to love that show. The second I looked at that, Josh's voice came into my head, "Hug me, broth-ah!" :'D Most heart-warming part of the show.

Don't worry about him, I'm sure dear Tait is just running late because Kit messed with his alarm clock again. ;D
I have faith in you. <3
If you're not kind, I don't know who is. But thank you nonetheless. :3

I never though orange as being that close to brown. Especially bright orange. If anything, I think gold's a bit closer to brown. Isn't gold just yellow + brown?
Really? And who would that be? :O /yeah right xD
You're welcome, and I have no clue either. xD That's okay though. I have plenty of trouble remembering everything I want to say myself. ;P

I gotta ask though, what would the bachelors/characters like once they start falling in lurve/after marriage? Specifically for 056, Cotton, Half (depending on which personality stays I guess) and Titus.

Wha, you're interested in Titus? :D Hehe, I'm flattered, thank you. I actually have something special in mind for Titus as he falls in love. But it's a big spoiler on his part, and some of it wouldn't make as much sense if you don't know his backstory. I do have it typed up though, so if you still wanna know I can put it in spoilers. ^^

[gentlegirlfarmer1228]

Anwar is totally a stalker. Which is why he is my second favorite XD.

Oh yeah I like her too. Her name starts with an S but I can't remember how it's spelled DX.

I like all the girls besides Nanai. She is too old for him >:/.

I love the stalker types too.


Sylphy's her name. It might be because she reminds me of Ciel, a character from one of my favorite JRPGs, Hexyz Force.



But my opinion might change as I advance to the game. XD I can't even get a hold of the DS...my sister is hogging it. :Y Talk about hooked! XD

@sodalicious-

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Odette= Jem? Should I draw her with purple hair too? D: /no.

B-but Eric he- he's V_V. Fine. *goes emo in a corner with Sodalicious*

You? Evil?

NO. >:0

I told you pink is manly.

but Cards is manlier. *shot* >.<

[Googaboga]

Sorry Princess XD. I know that would be pretty neat. But it's not good for them. I mean just the wedding would be ridiculous o_o.

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Mayor: Dolly do you take this man uuuh men? To be your husband(s)?
Dolly: I do.
Doctor Eye: You do for which one haha?!
Dolly: Both! And who invited you anyways?
Mayor: Okay now do you Cotton take Dolly to be your wife?
Cotton: I do ^^.
Mayor: And what about you Half?
Half: Well apparently I do. It's not like I have much of a choice now do I.
Dolly: Hey!
Half: I'm not saying I don't want to get married. I mean I do but-
Dolly: Ha he said "I do" we're married now. In your face!
Half: Hey! I didn't agree to that yet!
Cotton: Calm down you guys. I don't want you two to fight on our wedding.
Guard: They got married, that's great!
056: No Guard, no that's not great. That's just weird. Even for this town!
Mayor: Alright settle down the wedding isn't over yet. Someone still has to kiss the bride.
Half: I'll do it.
Cotton: We can both kiss her.
Half: Yeah but I get to do it first.
Cotton: What!? That's no fair.
Half: Well that's too bad.
Cotton: Why don't we ask Dolly?
Dolly: Oh boy. Let's keep this between you guys.
Half: No. We're gonna go with what Cotton suggested. Who's it gonna be?
Dolly: Oh Gosh! Why must this happen DX?
Ghost: I think they're going have a wonderful life together.
Jem; You really think that?
Ghost: No, not really.
Cotton: Choose!
Half: Choose already!
Mayor: The wedding isn't over until someone kisses her.
Twinkle: This wedding will never end!
Dolly: Uhhg.

Can you imagine that everyday? That's crazy

We missed you too Sorbet <3.

Okay great. I'll make sure to add his bio to the front page. It is impressive you put so much into your characters.

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Haaaaiiiir flip :D. So sad that's the first thing I decide to mention XD. Great job as always Sorbet. It always makes me laugh to read about the few sane people and how they react to the horror that nearly everyone else is insane. Anyways it is an awesome bio. He is a lovely character that would be really fun to befriend in an actual RF game. He's the type of guy I've always wanted in an RF game ^^.

Whatever you plan to release is fine with me. I'm interested in learning more about Snap and Willow though X3.

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Hur hur maybe I should do some 056 events to make up for the trick. Poor guy did get stabbed after all XD. I wanted people to take Reed seriously. I'm sure many people thought he didn't compare to the others. But no, he's just as crazy as the rest . The dialog I had was made because I planned to make it a joint event at first. Where you'd get the same event but from a different stand point depending on which guy you had wooed. For example instead of going to see Reed, if you had wooed 056 you would have stayed with him. And then ran into Reed later in the event after 056 convinced you to go on a walk with him. But after forgetting everything I had thought out for 056 I decided to make his role much smaller and just do something else for 056's final event.

I'm glad ^^.

I read it and it was very good. I'm not sure if they two would even associate that much. But it's still nice to think about what characters think of other characters.

Okay so that's how it will go. It can be added to one of her events.

They had problems and didn't assign a teacher. But it's fixed now.

I agree. There has to be at least some people in that town that don't leave you feeling depressed or ticked off XD.

That's true. I guess it's not so bad not being able to design characters.

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Yep. But now in the settlement he has all day to obsess. It's not really healthy but he's so endearing you can't help but root for him XD.

Oh eheh I was talking to myself for a bit there. I just wish the things I make in my games would actually happen in real RF games. I forgot that you don't know the plot/gimmick of my new idea ^^;. It is pretty unlikely they'll ever make something like that. Which is too bad cause I've really grown on this idea.

Hmm maybe. I love rival kids and I'm sure the kids of these characters would be very interesting. But there are a lot of rival couples. I'm up to nine couples (err eight and a half. Stupid idiot guy not working with any rival girl. I hate him so. Might as well erase him grumble grumble) That's a lot of new characters for a game that doesn't even focus on the kids. Oh maybe I could make another new RF idea that was about the children of the rival couples as adults. That would be really neat. I have decided, I shall make that game and dedicate it to you for giving me the idea . I'm excited about it. Rival kids are awesome.

Wait what is what for? Okay so Ceil will get her memory back and we'll work on finding a way to get her home. I mean one of my characters leaves the settlement temporarily to go on a trip someone important. That character is the guest character in my new RF idea X3. Poor Feathers v.v.

I know it's sad. But I can't change Cards. It's not in his character to fall for someone other then Melah. Sparrow will just have to accept that. But they can be friends. If Sparrow is willing to be the one who changes.

She could just introduce him to the nicer people around. I'm sure Sparrow could be taught. Especially if she keeps get rejected. She'll have to realize sooner or later she is doing something wrong.

Okay that's something we can work on later.

Hur hur don't be a heart breaker Imagine. But I will work on her some more.

I guess everyone runs out of ideas sometimes. Or you're right and they just stop bothering to work hard.

I'm glad they are up there on the polls. Same with Cotton/Half >:3.

It was pretty sad. But it wasn't as sad as it could have been. There was some happiness there.

Uuuuh okay I'll try. But I really don't think I'll be able to do that. So if it is so bad I refuse to show it you'll have to pick something else XD.

Well I don't have nearly enough for a full game. So it's take a lot of work. But that's just one more idea to go back to one of these days.

I'm glad you liked it. Mayor is much more mature then most of the other guys. I hope he gets at least some fans.

I did catch up on my sleep. Thanks for asking ^^. Although I am tired again. But that's cause I stayed up too late watching old episodes of Pokemon last night. It was worth it XD!

@Dolly
I know right. That's why Cards and Anwar are so great XD.

Yeah Sylphy. That's her. Oh wow she is pretty. She looks like a mix of Sylphy and Lauca. I guess it's the feathers on the shoes that make me think of Lauca XD.

Aaw sorry your sister is hogging it. Isn't there only one save file o_o. Either way I hope you get a turn.

[SilverFire]

*pokes head in*

hi!!!!!! lookin' good~

*takes head out*

[Googaboga]

Thanks Silvey ^^

Yay almost 100 votes :D.

Anyways I think I'm going to try and come up with a 056 event today. And then Cotton or Half. I have decided to do the events of the characters that people like.

[Princess-of-Dragons]

Hahaha, it's fine. Though, yes, I can imagine that everyday. It'd make marriage a lot more interesting. XD

[Googaboga]

Poor Cotton/Half would break after awhile from fighting with himself so often XD.

I started working on their final event where you choose which one goes and it is so sad. Half makes you feel like such a jerk if you pick him DX.

[gentlegirlfarmer1228]

Yay Cardsy is winning...followed by 056.

Oh Ghost too! :'D

[soluna]

Since I'm bored beyond belief, I decided to write RF-esque dialogue for Cotton and Half, although I'm only on Cotton right now and not nearly close to being done. >_>
They'll probably be severely out of character BUT IT'S THE THOUGHT THAT COUNTS

Since I don't have time to read the entire plot (oh yes but I have time to write all this « Cow Poopoo » i know) there will probably be a lot of inaccurate/completely wrong things here. Pffft. I'm trying my best to avoid any plot-related things.

Pieces of dialogue I have so far...

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-Dolly...
-...?
-Have I said anything... weird to you yet?
-...no? (Yet?)
-Oh. Okay...
-???


-.........
-Why so quiet?
-I'm just... thinking about something. No big deal!
Ha ha ha.
-...that laughter kind of says otherwise... (Weird people all around me...!)
-S-sorry!


-I'm sorry if this is really personal, but...
How did you end up here?
-Hm? Well, apparently I was banished here for crimes
against the empire...
-What kind of crime?
-...
-...oh, right, sorry...
-How about you?
-/sigh/ I wish I could tell you.
-Well, why can't you?
-I don't remember, either.
-I see...
-Half might tell you, though. Emphasis on 'might'...


-Dolly!
-Huh!? You startled me!
Why are you yelling my name?
-I just think your name is catchy. Sorry for startling you.
-Oh... well, that's kind of weird, but, thank you.
-...what do you think of my name?
-Well, it's different, but I like it!
-O-oh... well, thank you...

[Googaboga]

Hooray. I love it when the poll agrees with me X3.

I hope you don't mind Dolly. I've been spending more time on Pinkie's game then yours now :'(. But I am almost done with the characters (I'm up to 27 including the MCs). Then I can work more on this idea again ^^.

That's awfully nice of you to write something . And that's okay if you haven't read all that stuffs. There is always room for more dialog. You can write as much as you like. And then if you want I'll write the dialog that is about the plot so you don't have to read everything.

I think you did a very nice job. I don't think it is out of character. Cotton seems very cute which is just the way he should be :D.

I guess the only comment I have is it would make more sense if Cotton just said "I don't remember." instead of "I don't remember, either." Because Dolly hides the fact she lost her memories. As far as she knows everyone in town has no idea she doesn't remember her past.

Spoiler:

Of course there are some people in town that do know she lost her memories. She just doesn't know it XD.

[gentlegirlfarmer1228]

It's okay Pokie. I'm happy you're happy with making RF ideas for your friends. It makes our herats warm inside. Just you posting this idea is happiness enough. Besides, I'm doing a poor job maintaning its activeness.